Jackie L.

A man named Bill got a pool and he didnt know that it was magical. He invited his friend Jack over for a swim. Jack stepped up to the deck and said, "i hope it's not cold." It immediatly froze into ice. He was astonashed. Bill who was busy focusing on getting on his goggels said"It's hot.... i felt it before" Then the pool heated quickly and started to steam. "Whoa" Jack whispered. Bill walked up and looked in the pool. Then he dove right into the boiling hot water. His burnt face popped out an he screamed,"SHIT!" Then the water turned into... well you get what happens next.

funniness: 4.53

rating: PG